The book that I'm reading its about how they are in school and theres a new boy come in they class and his name is Rufus Fry. So then they go to lunch and then thats hen the boy be asking them for they lunch because they been telling him that they like to be nice to people for they wont feel bad. And then boy start getting use to the class and then they start being friends and then he start being cool with the girls and hanging out with them every day now for lunch because they are real nice too him and they miss chreat him he same way they want to be chreated.
my favorite character is 10 year-old kenny and this book is about a ten year old that lives with his family and they are going to birmingham all together
OK! Mrs Volpi i will listen to you. My favorite character is KENNY juts like shawndale. And really the book is really about how he live with his family and then he starts going to school and then thats when it be a new person in his class named Rufus Fry. And miss volpi i really miss u alot! And i want you to com e back when the virus thing go away.
Why is Kenny your favorite character? Does he remind you or someone you know? Or maybe yourself? Make sure you give examples from the book saying why he is your favorite character.
The Watsons Go To Birmingham book was about how a little 10 year old boy named kenny he is lived in michigan. His mother decided that they need to visted they grandmother. But the father decided that they need to go to.......... Juvenile Delinquent. So then they are fighting over were they going. So then they winded up going to......................... ( A.L.A.B.A.M.A ),and now they are having a good time with they kids and they invited they grandmother to go with them and then they was having a good time. At the end,they wined up living out there and they had fun an they kids grew real big and they went to......... ( Juvenile,Delinquent ).... But the book was real good! AND THATS THHE END OF THE STORY!!
And ms chang i answed your questions hat you asked me on top of Ms.Volpi comment. And at home i am reading my book club book, but i don't like to read my inderpended book because then i will get mixed up with the charters in each book.
The book that I'm reading its about how they are in school and theres a new boy come in they class and his name is Rufus Fry.
ReplyDeleteSo then they go to lunch and then thats hen the boy be asking them for they lunch because they been telling him that they like to be nice to people for they wont feel bad.
And then boy start getting use to the class and then they start being friends and then he start being cool with the girls and hanging out with them every day now for lunch because they are real nice too him and they miss chreat him he same way they want to be chreated.
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ReplyDeleteHi Ameena,
ReplyDeleteI just read your first response to The Watson's Go to Birmingham. 3 things I want you to try and do in your next response:
1. Remember to identify the characters you are writing about instead of using "they"
2. Try to write in clear and complete sentences. Many of your sentences are "run-on" sentences. You are not using enough punctuation.
3. Try and answer ALL of the questions asked of you. Ms. Chang wants to know who your favorite character is so far....
my favorite character is 10 year-old kenny and this book is about a ten year old that lives with his family and they are going to birmingham all together
ReplyDeleteOK! Mrs Volpi i will listen to you.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite character is KENNY juts like shawndale.
And really the book is really about how he live with his family and then he starts going to school and then thats when it be a new person in his class named Rufus Fry.
And miss volpi i really miss u alot! And i want you to com e back when the virus thing go away.
Why do you like Kenny? Can you relate to him? If so then how? Give evidence from the book.
ReplyDeleteAmeena,
ReplyDeleteMuch better! Try and think about the 3 things I told you to think about when you answer Ms. Chang's question above.
Shawndale,
ReplyDeleteWhy are Kenny and his family going to Birmingham?
Why is Kenny your favorite character? Does he remind you or someone you know? Or maybe yourself?
Make sure you give examples from the book saying why he is your favorite character.
More posts you guys. Keep up with the good work and the reading.
ReplyDeleteThe Watsons Go To Birmingham book was about how a little 10 year old boy named kenny he is lived in michigan.
ReplyDeleteHis mother decided that they need to visted they
grandmother.
But the father decided that they need to go to..........
Juvenile Delinquent.
So then they are fighting over were they going.
So then they winded up going to.........................
( A.L.A.B.A.M.A ),and now they are having a good time with they kids and they invited they grandmother to go with them and then they was having a good time.
At the end,they wined up living out there and they had fun an they kids grew real big and they went to.........
( Juvenile,Delinquent ).... But the book was real good!
AND THATS THHE END OF THE STORY!!
And ms volpi miss u and i want you to come back to your class!!
ReplyDeleteAnd ms chang i answed your questions hat you asked me on top of Ms.Volpi comment.
ReplyDeleteAnd at home i am reading my book club book, but i don't like to read my inderpended book because then i will get mixed up with the charters in each book.